there are moments
which we don't want to let go
at least not as easy as they wish
one that moment just passed away
of course I tried to keep hold
but could not make it
it slipped...
slipped out of hands
as does the sand
no complaints... no regrets...
I had much...
much that I could ever treasure
still less than wished for
hope still remains
that someday
I'll live a moment like this again
then the memories will pour like rain...
5 After Thoughts:
U cum out wid vry appropriate pics 4 ur poems..ths ne s nce too....!!
Deepak its really really good ..I can guess how thsi poem came out but ddint knew it would come so touchy !! Wonderful yaar , and dont worry be prepared with an umbrella , for in near future it will rain harder ;) ( i guess u got my point ?)
@ chetna:
thanx dear. and every picture tells a story...
@ adreamygal:
hey.. i wont be holding an umbrella coz i luv the rains fall on my face.. hehe
True true!
Really very true.
Nice serene composition.
:)
@ zave: thanx a lot for the comment and also for the visit here
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