whole day long, I
keep wandering
here and there,
knowing no place
to be exactly where.
tired and breathless
I try to find a place
where I can
sit and rest
and have solace.
nothing seems
genuine in this
whole bloody world,
no noble face I see
all look cruel.
and when I get
too much tired
I get up to find
my hidden world
and someone kind
there I find
some sure hope
after having roam
for whole day long
I reach to her at home
her loving touch
makes me feel
better instantly,
the kiss on forehead
and a hug with love
do all that is needed
every evening,
tired and breathless
I reach my home,
there I get my world,
waiting eagerly for me,
my lovely Mom
18 After Thoughts:
i think des r words which comes 4m d heart of d person who really lovs her mom..
god bless u..
keep blogging & make us feel proud of u..
Wow Deepak . these words , mainly the starting few lines have come directly from heart :) A lovely poem :) I did find a line incorrect , but then changing that will rob the orginality of the poem :)and its too good to be modified :)
Very good looking blog
Amazing words to display a wonderful feeling..!!Keep writing..!!Good work..!!
Your fellow Ca student..;-)..
Amar..!!
Amazing words to display a wonderful feeling..!!Keep writing..!!Good work..!!
Your fellow Ca student..;-)..
Amar..!!
I really liked your poem...but then, I am a mom. What a special tribute you have written to your own mother, at least I hope that's the case.
Truly, there is nothing like the love for our mother.
b
beautifully written!! Jus loved it.
following isn't a big thing dude, its reading regularly after the follow that i find difficult. i follow more than a 100 blogs, and at one time used to read all very exuberantly as well. but now, i haven't that time coz of work and sometimes due to illness.
u've written this poem quite well.. the words u've used nicely. i used this same template once too.. but grey is dull.. not that inviting. perhaps u can search a better one to ur liking. make ur signature gel with the background too.. just some suggestions..
no suggestions for ur writes, they'll develop as u write more. its quite fine right now. take care.
...nice one..!!
That was a lovely poem! sincere feelings poured into words!
good take on the prompt!
Well written and very endearing!
@ vishal: thanks bro :-)
@ adreamygal: thank u dreamy. and please let me know every time u find anything incorrect :-)
@ neha: thanks :-)
@ amar: thanks mate. best of luck for ur CA :-)
@ lilibeth: thanks, yeah, thats exactly the case but also it is dedicated to all the mothers, to u too :-)
@ b: yeah, i guess so too :-)
@ ria: oh..thanks a lot :-)
@ leo: thank u leo, for the praise and also for the valuable suggestions for my blog. I think thats the sign of a good friend that u constantly suggest for improvements :-) thanks for following too :-)
@ vidisha: thanks a lot :)
@ just someone: thanks mate :-)
@ jay: thank u :-)
How beautiful! From the image to each carefully selected word... makes me feel so grateful to be a Mom of children who love me.
THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!
My Three Word Wednesday Offering
@ julie: thanks a lot. I'm really honored :-)
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