Moments drag breaths
Metamorphosis awaited
Before it does last
P.S. - This time I didn't care about the syllables. It is not a crime in the poetic world I guess.
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4 After Thoughts:
well u didnt go for syllables, but they've come out fine ;) 17 in all.
lovely haiku dude.
@ leo: yeah, i know they are 17 in all but I was talking about individual lines. thanks for liking :)
i loved the pic here .. it adds charm to the words !
@ nimue: awe thank you... pics attract me too :)
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