Each night a new player
Tired of living a blemish life
Lonely prostitute seeks escape
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27 After Thoughts:
Picture and words compliment each other.
feelings so well expressed!
Yes, the dirty men's world where some women join the men to spoil the innocence of many girls....i have worked with some such girls at one point in time, as a lawyer...but no, it continues,
keep writing Deepak, it counts :)
wishes,
devika
So well said.. only if the escape comes..let us keep the fingers crossed.. you have put a fantastic message here..Deepak..
Would be a pleasure having you visit my posts.. I have made two this time..
...good..
well said...then the other day i saw one seeking refuge in a neighborhood for she got preggy...
a very original take on this prompt.
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So true...very well written... :)
@ harshad: thanks for ur words :)
@ devika: yes, no matter how hard to try to stop it, it continues. But we should keep trying :) thanks for dropping by :)
@ ramesh: I'm glad u liked it. And yes, I've been to ur blog and the posts are awesome :)
@ vidisha: thank u :)
@ amity: thanks. sigh :(
@ geraldine: thanks a lot :)
@ sumit: thanks :)
Ha! trying...I've left the legal practice altogether after marriage...He doesn't like me working as a social activist in those areas...The typical mind-set of Indian men...and I have agreed to it, as far as i stay in the marriage i'll heed to his advice :)
But yes, i'm part of some NGOs serving the blind and the handicapped...there are lots to do, if one will open eyes to the outside world :)
wishes,
devika
Excellent take on the prompt. The words and picture go perfectly together to create the feeling.
Short words, deeper cuts... nice one!
@ devika: well, In my opinion, to do some good work you don't require any sort of qualification. You've left your legal practice but you're working with NGOs which is equally good. Cheers :) and thanks for coming back again :)
@ teresa: thanks :) half credit goes to the picture owner whoever he/she is :)
@ blasphemous: I wish the cuts heel soon. I'm glad u liked it :)
And in my opinion, Education matters, but in the right way :)
I don't think without the kind of education I got I would be doing anything; --- Not for a debate, just saying...because, when i start a conversation i have to take it to the end --
cheers!
devika
@ devika: Being a Chartered Accountant myself, I fully agree that education matters. Your point is respectfully taken :) Lets end it here Ma'am :)
hahaha! okay done :)
best wishes, with your writing, Deepak,
devika
@ devika: thanks a lot for ur wishes, it really matters for an amateur writer like me :)
it's there always, Deepak...even if i'm not commenting always :)
wishes,
devika
You captured the despair with so few words...very poignant.
very reflective,
well put and convincing!
once in there is no escape but in death...sad sad feeling!...well expressed!
Sad state of affairs, which goes on and on..
dad, farther and farther away
such a lonely life, to be with yet be so alone.
Nicely done.
Love your header picture!
very thoughtful! expressed well the pain in haiku
so very true- very poignant
@ devika: Thanks, comments surely encourage :)
@ sweetest: thanks a lot :)
@ jingle: thank u, glad u liked it :)
@ nalini: death - escape - sigh
@ gautami: yeah it does.
@ reflections: thanks for liking the post and header picture :)
@ umapoems: I'm glad u liked it :)
@ patti: thanks a lot :)
Deepak, this one is so well crafted.. Loads on intensity goes in. I am touched to see how simple words could convey a huge heap of emotions.. well done..
xx
@ olivia: thanks for such a genuine praise :) and yes, beauty in is the simplicity i guess :)
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