Saturday 12 November, 2011

Obsession

I drank with a hitch,
sip of love mustering strength;
rather my obsession.


19 After Thoughts:

Anonymous said...

ah the shades love brings in us, just turn us obsessed, isnt it? But the positive elements in your poem made me smile :)Liked your haiku :)

Grace said...

creative take on the prompt ~ i like that sip of love ~

Vinay Leo R. said...

love does leave one obsessed! well written and good to see you return to haiku heights! :)

Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason

Nanka said...

A lovely irresistible urge and overpowering too!!

Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...

so true,
well done.

Live2cherish said...

love-obsession it is for sure.

Its my first time here, i loved the background image on your blog.

kaykuala said...

Deepak,
A clever way of combining the prompts into one. Great haiku!

Hank

Anonymous said...

Nicely done ~~~

Chèvrefeuille said...

Well done haiku on "obsession". Thank you for sharing.

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Love is an obsession. One that can last a life time. Nice one.


Melanie

Deepak said...

@ adreamygal: thanks dear :)

@ grace: thanks, me too :)

@ leo: thanks mate :)

@ nanka: thanks :)

@ morning: thanks :)

@ live2cherish: thanks for liking the post and the blog pic :)

@ kaykuala: thanks a lot, I'm not that clever though :)

@ beccagivens: thanks :)

@ chevrefeuille: thanks for the read :)

@ cassiopeia: ya true, thanks for dropping by :)

Anonymous said...

obsession of love makes us all hitch to survive :)

Deepak said...

@ meethimirchi: hmmm, thanks :)

Chim's World of Literature said...

i like the take on the prompt.....amazing

Deepak said...

@ chim: thanks a lot :)

Ruchi Jain said...

love expressed very well..

Deepak said...

@ ruchi: thanks a lot :)

Shreya said...

Lovely words :)

http://www.iredeem.blogspot.com/

Deepak said...

@ shreya: thanks a lot :)

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