Sunday, 3 October, 2010


In your eyes deep down
I look for nothing but love
My life rejoices

18 After Thoughts:

Someone Is Special said...

Hi Deepak..

Lovely haiku to go with the image.. too romantic..

I welcome you to Room for Romance.. Thanks for the support.. Happy Romantic Weekend..

--Someone Is Special--

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Inspired by your words and image:

eye to eye
breath to tender breath

Haiku Heights: Rejoice!

Brian Miller said...

nice haiku...seems you have found it...smiles.

gautami tripathy said...

Happy for you..!

is it love poetry or missing muse or nothing?

Zave said...

I could behave all girlie and say, "awww...".
But I think I can show my smile.

Priyanka Bhowmick said...

that's so beautiful!!!!

Hamid said...

WOW WELL SAID! your comment section's words made me to leave this comment.

Bing (PinkLady) said...

this is so romantic. indeed, the eyes say it all.

Rejoice (Haiku)

Deepak said...

@ someone: thank u and always there to support :)

@ magical: I'm glad that my words inspired u :)

@ brian: thanks :)

@ gautami: thank u ji :)

@ zave: yeah, smiling is always nice :)

@ priyanka: thanks a lot :)

@ hamid: thanks and come back again then :)

@ bing: yes, the eyes say it all :)

Ramesh Sood said...

Lovely haiku.. yes!

Jingle said...

love it,
short but compact and sweet.

Zainab Urooj said...

good one

Deepak said...

@ ramesh: thanks :)

@ jingle: I'm glad, thanks :)

@ zainab: thanks :)

ViDiShA said...

...just so b'ful..!!

Deepak said...

@ vidisha: thanks a lot :)

Olivia said...

Lovely- romantic.. beautiful.. :D

Olivia said...

Hello, how are you?
you are invited to join our poetry community, a place for poets to share and encourage.
Please check us out at:
Jingle Poetry :
Our Monday Poetry Potluck is open from Sunday 8pm to Wednesday, 8am.
Write a poem fitting our week 7 theme (love and romance), post it, and link in to our potluck post as soon as we are open, that's how you get the best possible feedback.
We value your contribution and cherish your poetry talent.
Let me know if you have further questions..Hope to see you then.

Deepak said...

@ olivia: thanks a lot for liking it :) and I will definitely join in there at jingle poetry as soon as I can, thanks for the invitation :)

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