Friday 15 March 2013

Origami


Folded red heart,
Under her bare feet,
Seeking merciful acceptance.



7 After Thoughts:

adreamygal said...

Awww.. he must be so sad and heartbroken. But I agree, girls do that (for that matter, even guys do) Point is, that really breaks heart into pieces. Hopefully, her pride sees his love :)

Deepak said...

adreamygal: The point is, to love. That's it. Nothing else matters :)

Sri Valli said...

Touching haiku! Happy visiting this site after long time! :)

Strummed Words said...

Poor heart!

Deepak said...

Sri Valli: Thanks a lot :) Will try to be consistent this time :)

Strummed Words: Heart is always poor :) Thanks for dropping by :)

Raajii said...

This is beautiful :-).

P.S. Sorry, I do not write in the poetry blog anymore - I just dont have time to manage two blogs :-(. But some day I'll put it up again, and will let you know when I do.

Deepak said...

Raajii: Thanks a lot Raajii :)

P.S.- And I'll wait for that day :)

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