Monday 5 July 2010

Microfiction Monday # 5


Annie,"Laura, just text him and call him here. He will be shocked to see his two girlfriends together. Let's teach him a lesson."


16 After Thoughts:

Zave said...

:D
God save the boy!

Peggy said...

What a laugh I got from this!
Perfect!

BECKY said...

Oh, that is really good!! That'll teach that boy. He doesn't know who he's dealing with!! Great story!

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

I think he is going to be into more than he bargained for.

sylviamorice said...

Oh--I do LIKE this one! Let's teach that b#@$%rd a lesson!

the replicant said...

He must have been gloating on Facebook.

ViDiShA said...

..poor boy..

Deepak said...

@ zave: poor boy :)

@ peggy: my pleasure :)

@ becky: thank you :)

@ bill: I think so too :)

@ sylviamorice: thanks :)

Ellie said...

That boy is in for a shock!

Loved your microfiction.

Deepak said...

@ replicant: :)

@ vidisha: yeah, he is :)

@ ellie: thank u :)

chetna said...

haha...:P:P
evn the thot f ths brings smile 2 my face...:):)
bad tme fr tht boy...hehe:):)

Deepak said...

@ chetna: don't laugh at the boy, one of the girls may be you :-) hahaha

ninotaziz said...

Whoa...can someone explain to me why this reminds me of GREASE?

Lovely!

Deepak said...

@ ninotaziz: at least me not :-)

thanks for stopping by

chetna said...

vry funny nthng 2 laugh so mch..:)
if it ll b thn its gne b a extremly bad(wrst) tme fr tht boy...:P

Deepak said...

@ chetna: oh god, plz save the boys from this girl :-)

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