Sunday, 1 August, 2010


Moments drag breaths
Metamorphosis awaited
Before it does last

P.S. - This time I didn't care about the syllables. It is not a crime in the poetic world I guess.


4 After Thoughts:

Leo said...

well u didnt go for syllables, but they've come out fine ;) 17 in all.

lovely haiku dude.

Deepak said...

@ leo: yeah, i know they are 17 in all but I was talking about individual lines. thanks for liking :)

Nimue said...

i loved the pic here .. it adds charm to the words !

Deepak said...

@ nimue: awe thank you... pics attract me too :)

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