Sunday, 8 August, 2010


"This field isn't for you"
Suggestions come from everywhere
Stealthily I pen down


11 After Thoughts:

Greyscale Territory said...

Interesting tension of thoughts! One almost overturns the other! Very creative!

Me-Era* said...

Awesome blog here too. :) Following.

And about this Haiku, contradictory,positive and brave. :)

Stan Ski said...

Keep on scribbling...

Someone Is Special said...

Great.. Superb Lines..

Yours Frendly,
Someone Is Special

Tweety said...

ah writing...perfect especially for us bloggers..

Leo said...

will agree with tweety, ur lines are just beautiful! :) esp for us bloggers!

Vibhuti B said...

Hey Deepak,
You are great at Haiku too..
Indeed beautiful lines..
Just had to tell you, like Leo instructed me...
Haiku is when you write these 3 lines on Nature..when its related to human emotions, the three line poetry is called senryu!
Happy to have found ur blog!
write on..

Deepak said...

@ greyscale: thanks a lot :)

@ meera: thanks for following and liking the haiku :)

@ stan ski: definitely :)

@ someone: thanku :)

@ tweety: yeah, i guess so too :)

@ leo: thank u to you too :)

@ vibhuti: well, i don't really understand the definition of anything. by the way thanks for the info and liking the post :)

Ramesh Sood said...

Well Deepak, my first visit and I am so happy.. one thing..try not to even pen them down..what do you say.. will like you to visit me too.. let us continue to practice Happiness in this space..

Bikramjit said...

nicely written.. i beleive that a person is one who listen to everyone and takes all suggestions then uses his mind to find a answer and use that .. :)

Deepak said...

@ ramesh: Well, sir its ur second visit if I remember :) and I think u didn't get the poem right. I don't pen down others' suggestions, I really don't care about them. I just pen down my words, stealthily though :) hope u got it now

@ bikram: yes, ultimately decision should be your own :)

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